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Just want to clear something up.  I`m writing a story about the day the book came out the night we played Bayern at Pittodrie.  I`m discussing some of the people I met along the way during our European adventure.  Especially a guy I met after the Lokomotiv Moscow match in the Youth Hostel.  He was a Rangers fan who had attended the match against the Russian`s and claimed he was hoping to go to every Scottish ground supporting the "home team" and was heading for Arbroath Vs Montrose that following Saturday afternoon.  I wrote the following about this particular incident.

 

"If the The Red Ultra`s had found out there was a Castle Greyskull spy defacing Jimmy Calderwood`s tactics he might have been lynched to death.  Just don`t do these type of things when footballing rivalries are involved."

 

This was my attempt to show a bit of humour at the situation because I know some of you might not have been so understanding. If anyone is offended please let me know and I`ll change it.

 

Cheers!

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"If the The Red Ultra`s had found out there was a Castle Greyskull spy defacing Jimmy Calderwood`s tactics he might have been lynched to death

 

I think the Red Ultras may have something so say about that!

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'lynched to death' is a dreadful piece of writing. If this is representative of your standards then I'd consider pulling more of the book that just that section.

 

Best wishes,

 

Ajja

 

I wondered how you lynched someone to death!

 

Surely "lynched and beaten to death" or "stoned to death by a lynch mob" or... ???

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Can someone enlighten me as to what this is about?

 

Dear mileenddon,

 

Mr SeeBass is a much celebrated, highly rated author in these parts, and often likes to tease us donstalkers with a cheeky glimpse of his forth-coming publications.

 

However on this occasion it sounds shite.

 

 

Hope that helps.

 

Christian the Slater.

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Dear mileenddon,

 

Mr SeeBass is a much celebrated, highly rated author in these parts, and often likes to tease us donstalkers with a cheeky glimpse of his forth-coming publications.

 

However on this occasion it sounds shite.

 

 

Hope that helps.

 

Christian the Slater.

 

What has he written, must be good if he's celebrated in this messageboard.

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